btw I also cut off the rant at the beginning of this post Idk what it was but considering what this starts with I assume I was talking about something before I started replying to reviews
ON TO REVIEW REPLIES!!
starting off with reviews from ASAS:
ch25 from Flightfoot (yeah, I know you posted this review
forever ago...)
That is EXACTLY what's going on. I couldn't have described it better myself.
to recap what they said:
"It's not so much that the Kingdom Key is broken, it's more like Sora's broken and he transfers that brokenness to his keyblade."
That is EXACTLY what's going on. I couldn't have described it better myself.
to recap what they said:
"It's not so much that the Kingdom Key is broken, it's more like Sora's broken and he transfers that brokenness to his keyblade."
ch25 from Cookie:
I bet it would be interesting to see what Mickey had to say about Sora's Keyblade, but one of the reasons why that got cut was because I had no clue what he would've said.
I'm sure I would've come up with something eventually, and I'm sure I can still come up with something, but at the time I wasn't going to sit for an extra few days and mull it over if I could easily take it out and move along.
actually, that's what I usually do when I start getting stuck: If the part I'm getting stuck on isn't important and I don't desperately want or anything, it's going to get cut.
I bet it would be interesting to see what Mickey had to say about Sora's Keyblade, but one of the reasons why that got cut was because I had no clue what he would've said.
I'm sure I would've come up with something eventually, and I'm sure I can still come up with something, but at the time I wasn't going to sit for an extra few days and mull it over if I could easily take it out and move along.
actually, that's what I usually do when I start getting stuck: If the part I'm getting stuck on isn't important and I don't desperately want or anything, it's going to get cut.
ch25 from KKBeckett:
I'm assuming that "chat format" is something along the lines of IM chats, like you said, too.
I don't know if that's true or not, but I'd rather be safe than sorry.
And I have no clue why it's not allowed. fanfic just says it isn't and I'd rather not risk getting my account removed for something as stupid as that.
I'm assuming that "chat format" is something along the lines of IM chats, like you said, too.
I don't know if that's true or not, but I'd rather be safe than sorry.
And I have no clue why it's not allowed. fanfic just says it isn't and I'd rather not risk getting my account removed for something as stupid as that.
ONTO REVIEWS FROM DEAD INSIDE!!
(I'll talk about Zack after I respond to your comments on the chapter... or
maybe I'll put the thing about Zack in a seperate post... would that be weird?
No, it wouldn't be. I'll just do that.)
ch118 from Peach
Joseph can be surprisingly... not crazy/hyper when he wants to be.
And yes, Shad sucks.
Joseph can be surprisingly... not crazy/hyper when he wants to be.
And yes, Shad sucks.
ch118 from Flightfoot:
It's less of that Yuffie and Joseph are more mature, and more of that Shad just can't do anything to them. That, or he didn't feel it was necessary (though I bet he really wanted to strangle Joseph as soon as Joseph broke up the shouting...)
It's less of that Yuffie and Joseph are more mature, and more of that Shad just can't do anything to them. That, or he didn't feel it was necessary (though I bet he really wanted to strangle Joseph as soon as Joseph broke up the shouting...)
ch118 from KKBeckett:
Well, you didn't have comment's about the chapter, but I have to say:
HAH! I so called it!
(I'll let you know exactly what I called in the post about Zack)
Well, you didn't have comment's about the chapter, but I have to say:
HAH! I so called it!
(I'll let you know exactly what I called in the post about Zack)
ch118 from Cookie:
It is kinda nice to see Leon take charge.
And it being funny was one of the main reasons I even bothered with doing this.
Why exactly is Kairi bothering you? If it's because she's being really... uhh... "AOSFIOSHFOISFSIOFNSOFIJWOIEJROEIASN" about her faith in Sora, then it's not really her fault. That's Shad's fault.
Trust me, I've written later chapters, and her attitude improves greatly.
I just had to have her be all "ASDOIFHSODFISDOFIUSEROIEANFSD" now, because Shad's trying to keep his control over her. I mean, seriously, his hold on her lasted about a day. If I didn't have this whole "ASOIDFHSODIFUESRIOESNAF" process happen, then it would be weird (at least for me) because, y'know, his hold on her only lasted a day. I mean, it still lasts only a day, but at least he put up a fight to keep it there.
Makes me feel better, at least.
It is kinda nice to see Leon take charge.
And it being funny was one of the main reasons I even bothered with doing this.
Why exactly is Kairi bothering you? If it's because she's being really... uhh... "AOSFIOSHFOISFSIOFNSOFIJWOIEJROEIASN" about her faith in Sora, then it's not really her fault. That's Shad's fault.
Trust me, I've written later chapters, and her attitude improves greatly.
I just had to have her be all "ASDOIFHSODFISDOFIUSEROIEANFSD" now, because Shad's trying to keep his control over her. I mean, seriously, his hold on her lasted about a day. If I didn't have this whole "ASOIDFHSODIFUESRIOESNAF" process happen, then it would be weird (at least for me) because, y'know, his hold on her only lasted a day. I mean, it still lasts only a day, but at least he put up a fight to keep it there.
Makes me feel better, at least.
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